- Establishing shot of pan of entire court and fort.
- Kids house on left side, bad guys house on right side
- shadow of bully should be coming in from the right side
- girl's brother is shoveling snow of his own driveway from the left side (his own house)
- little girl is playing by the entrance of the fort
- she gets thrown out of the fort and skids across the snow into her own driveway as her brother is shoveling snow.
- girl's name is Jane
- As Jane tries to throw snow after making it, Nikolai takes it from her and throws it himself
- screen direction is changed
- Jane tries to participate in snow war by running after her brother and neighbour kids
- we can use old fashion can phones that are attached by a string
- use world deadliest warrior reference in war room
- as we transition in from the lens flare of the sun and into the war room, the lamp should flicker a bit as we cut to kids
- One kid should get knocked out right when they're walking out of the garage in slow motion (armageddon parody)
- after that one kid gets bombarded with snow, the other kids scream in panic
- Keep the enemy a mystery
- Make sure we do not reveal the bully's face
- Bob, Jane, Cross eyed Nikolai, Fat Phil
No drumming sequence of the little girl
Don't need to show button being pressed before garage door opens
When walking out, remove girl from front of scene, when garage door opens
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