Tuesday, 11 October 2011

OCT-11/2011 Storyboards Critiques



·      Staging problems in the beginning
·      Near the end have characters close up wincing
·      Pans are really lengthy
·      Too much of a build up to set inside of forte
·      Don’t give away bicycle right away
·      Play more on staging when they come out of the garage
·      Have toy representation of Nico in the war room
·      Set up a rhythm of introduction of names
·      Have name title for all character just like Nico and Phil

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